TASK 2- ESSAY No.8

Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Its is (rather shocking G mistake) a well known universal (one adjective will do)fact that death is inevitable, so must the end of Mother earth-gift to man from God (too wordy / not clear). Some believe in the utilization of the worlds (P) resources for a better present life. Others have faith in conserving the nature (G)for a longer and safer existence. In my discussion, I will lay down the facts in favour of a precautious (not in my lexicon Mubs!!)today for a greener tomorrow.

With the rush to catch up with the developed world and out of fear of being labeled “backwards” , many developing countries have traded their greener pastures for huge sky scarpers (S), large malls, flyovers and so on by cutting down trees and destroying natural habitats. Such a quest to satisfy one’s selfish needs has led to global warming due to more carbon dioxide in air (G) than normal levels. Consequently, we have witnessed terrible tragedies for example Acid rain and landslides which eventually progress to droughts and Tsunamis. Moreover, asthma cases in younger children have risen and kids (WC - ugly) as young as 4 years old have been seen using inhalers in school nowadays.

It is predicted that by the year 2015, all (?) birds and plants would (will?) die in Pakistan and water would (will?) become a rare commodity due to soaring levels of air pollution and the axing of trees. Plants help us to clean the atmosphere and create a natural balance.But, due to alarming (?) levels of toxins in air (G) and deforestation , the ozone layer has stopped being the earths (P) protective blanket against harmful rays. As a direct consequence, the cases of skin cancer are on rise (G).

Time is running out as we sit on the verge of another natural catastrophe, larger than anyTsunami, which is bound to happen any moment. By paying no attention to the falling dominoes of nature, sadly, we can fool others, but not the web of life.

My advice, Mubs, is to go easy on the rhetoric. Be radical, critical, unorthodox and so on, but please keep it simple and elegant. Just play the IELTS game.

Thanks for offering your thoughts. Come on the other sleepwalkers!

Good luck

Tony

Its is a well known universal fact that death is inevitable, so must the end of Mother earth-gift to man from God. Some believe in the utilization of the worlds resources for a better present life. Others have faith in conserving the nature for a longer and safer existence. In my discussion, I will lay down the facts in favour of a precautious today for a greener tomorrow.

With the rush to catch up with the developed world and fear of being labeled “backwards” , many developing countries have traded their greener pastures for huge sky scarpers, large malls, flyovers and so on by cutting down trees and destroying natural habitats. Such a quest to satisfy one’s selfish needs has led to global warming due to more carbon dioxide in air than normal levels. Consequently we have witnessed terrible tragedies eg. Acid rains, landslides which eventually progress to droughts and Tsunami. Asthma cases in younger children have risen and as young as 4 year old kids have been seen using inhalers in school nowadays.


It is predicted that by the year 2015, all birds and plants would die in Pakistan and water would become a rare commodity due to soaring levels of air pollution and axing of trees. Plants help us to clean the atmosphere and create a natural balance.But, due to alerting levels of toxins in air and deforestation , the ozone layer has stopped being the earths protective blanket against harmful rays. Eventually, the cases of skin cancer are on rise.

Time is running out as we sit on the verge of another natural catastrophe, larger than Tsunami, bound to happen any moment. By paying no attention to the falling dominoes of nature, sadly, we can fool others, but not the web of life.