Be Or Not To Be !!

Hi Tony,
I am glad to write you this letter . I conceder it as agreat achievment i made, it is not easy to write a letter to an english tutor . therefore I will try to avoid the complecated words. I am a nurse and i have been working for nine years .In nursing we do not write much we communicate by using simple words , briefe sentences and lots of shortcuts ,that is why i feel i need to reevaluate my self and to look for my weaknesses.
IELTS band 7 is my target (mission impossible i guess) where i am going to work hard to pick up what i missed in the last years and improve my stander.
I think that is enough for tonight and excuse me if you did not like it .Iam looking forward for your stronge support and precious instructions.

Thank you Tony ,
Suad.